Content Standard: E. Processes of Writing
and Speaking Students will be able to: MLR Grade 3-4: ideas 2. Improve their finished product by
revising content from draft to final piece. Use Spandel's Six Trait
Model Partner revision practice. Scores on Fall and Spring writing
prompts. prewrite 3. Use planning, drafting, and
revising to produce, on-demand, a well-developed, organized
piece that demonstrates effective language use, voice, and
command of mechanics. . Provide students with many
opportunities to write well-developed pieces, such as letter
writing, DARE essay, research reports, "Exploding the
Moment" pieces. Fall and Spring writing
prompts. lead 4. Report orally and summarize
personal discoveries they have made as a result of reading
and viewing. Students will organize and present an
oral report. Provide students with research
opportunities. Using a rubric developed by teacher
and students, students will be assessed on their ability to
summarize and report orally. summarize 5. Give accurate
directions. Students will give multistep
directions Students will practice giving oral
directions for simple tasks such as brushing teeth, simple
recipe. Working with partners, students will
give directions for a simple task. The partner will follow
the directions given. If task was completed, directions were
complete. . 6. Summarize central concepts from
oral presentations. . Students will be given many
opportunities to listen to short oral presentations
including guest speakers, read-alouds, teacher-peer
presentations. Following the presentations, students will
summarize central concepts, in writing or orally. Using a summarizing rubric, teacher
will assess student summaries based on oral
presentations. who
Students will demonstrate the ability to use the skills and
strategies of the writing process.
Common
Assessment(s):
1. Identify strengths and weaknesses in their own writing
and see effective help from others.
Students will use a rubric based on Spandel's six traits of
writing to evaluate their writing and ask for an apply
appropriate feedback.
Students will work with a partner, in small groups, and as a
whole class to share writing pieces and to identify the
strengths and weaknesses of each piece.
During a writing conference, students will identify the
strengths and weaknesses of their piece based on the six
traits.
organization
word choice
sentence fluency
voice
conventions
revise
Use revision activities available in such resources as
Flip the Deck, Writer's Express, Day Book, and
Spandel materials.
Whole group revising of pieces for practice.
Teach steps of revision and provide many opportunities to
practice.
first draft
revise
edit
final copy
focus
details
conclusion
strong verbs
adjectives
voice
dialogue
Teach students how to summarize.
Have students report orally and summarize their new
learning.
main idea
details
speaker
audience
purpose
Students will practice writing directions for simple
tasks.
what
when
where
why